what a heartfelt post, i cried through out, for you and i both. i know how much you love babu and it was very evident in this writing. made me remember my nana. beautiful writing chodya, very proud of you for this. 🫂❤️
Areee nana ki yaad ayi tumko isse bada kya achievement ho sktaa haii, thank you so much parnika for making it throughout the writing, was very skeptical but I though posting something is better than nothing, I am very happy this could land good. Thank you so much for reading♥️♥️♥️!!
bhai please keep posting in hindi — this was so beautiful. i love reading hindi, added a layer of adoration because i know you a bit. i was absolutely blown away by the way you described the scenes you set up. it’s like every landscape carried with it its own sense of nostalgia and longing. thank you for posting, i feel so lucky to read this. beautiful beautiful! also, i love my grandparents too so it made me a little too emotional since i could see the way age makes us a little distant but the love is so omnipresent! goddamn imma bawl!
Bhai so true even love reading hindi, it feels so fresh and rejuvenating, I will try to write more in hindi and also avoid the grammatical mistakes which I know are present somewhere, thank you for the suggestion I will surely try writing in hindi more :)
Are It's my pleasure that curious and literature appreciating people like you read my work, I am the lucky one bhai🥹
The love for grandparents being omnipresent is so on point, I feel it definitely survives even after they leave us. Very happy that my writing could remind you of your grandparents, so so happy you read this🥹♥️♥️!!!
बहुत ही अच्छा लिखा है, दोस्त। सोमवार की शाम काम के बीच चाय के साथ तुम्हारी इस रचना ने आज चाय और बिस्किट की दोस्ती में दरार ला दी।
इस रचना ने मुझे अंत तक इस प्रकार बांधे रखा कि मैंने हर एक पात्र और दृश्य जैसे वह लोहे का दरवाजा, आम की पेटी पकड़े बच्चों, पुल, उन भेड़-बकरियों और सबकी छवि अपने मन में बना ली।
तुम्हारे नानाजी और उनके प्रति तुम्हारा लगाव जिस प्रकार तुमने व्यक्त किया है, वह हृदय को स्पर्श कर गया।
पढ़ते-पढ़ते एक अनुभूति तो थी कि अंत में कोई दुखद समाचार होगा, किन्तु फिर भी पढ़ने के बाद मन भारी सा हो गया।
और मैं तो केवल पढ़ रहा हूँ… तुम पर क्या बीती होगी, इसका पूर्णतः अनुमान भी नहीं लगा सकता।
शायद कुछ संबंध कभी पूरी तरह समाप्त नहीं होते, वे केवल स्मृतियों के रूप में हमारे भीतर रह जाते हैं।
जैसा कि महादेवी वर्मा ने लिखा है
“स्मृतियाँ कभी नष्ट नहीं होतीं, वे केवल रूप बदल लेती हैं।"
अंत में फिर से कहना चाहूंगा
यह रचना सचमुच बहुत सुंदर है।
उम्मीद करता हूँ कि तुम ऐसे ही लिखते रहो और सदा खुश रहो।
और जैसा कि तुम में पुस्तक लिखने के बारे में कहा है। तो यदि कभी तुम पुस्तक लिखो, तो मैं उसे अवश्य खरीदकर पढ़ूंगा।
आपके इतने विस्तार से लिखे हुए कमेन्ट के लीए पहले तो एक बहुत बड़ा आभार अनिमेष भाई।
मुझे बहुत अच्छा लगा सुन के की आपकी शाम की चाय के बीच यह लेख आपको मिला और आपने इसको अपने पूरे ध्यान से पढ़ा।
महादेवी वर्मा की ये पंक्ति मैने पहली बार पढ़ी है और इसे पढ़ के मुझे काफी अच्छा महसूस हुआ, मेरे नानाजी के प्रति मेरे प्रेम को आपने इतनी बारीकी से पहचाना उसके लिए में आपका बहुत आभारी रहूंगा।
किताब में तो अभी वक्त है लेकिन आपके शब्दों ने मुझमें लिखने की ऊर्जा का संचार कर दिया है, अवश्य जब में भविष्य में किताब लिखूंगा तो आप जरूर पढ़िएगा।
Looks like I mixed things up a bit. I was going to quote महादेवी वर्मा, but ended up using this line instead and forgot to remove that part. Monday mistakes 😭
I LOVED SO DAMN MUCH I'm this close to sobbing wow, the way you write in hindi is so grounded and in a way delighting, the memories part was so aching, i don't know what to say except that I feel like sobbing uncontrollably, so good yaar, would love more hindi posts from you 🫶🏻🫶🏻
also good luck with that cavity, RCT is in the top 10 worst things that can happen to a person 💔
I am glad the memories could invoke a sense of the weight they carry within, thanks for the appreciation of hindi, believe me it was very hard for me to write not because of the memories but because of the hindi grammar and words😭
I know I will suffer with rct im just ready for it #embracesuffering
so clearly I need to start reading more hindi because this took more energy than i thought but I had such an experience with this piece??? I'm definitely going to keep coming back to this!! I loved reading about your memories through this piece and it felt so personal and so heartfelt!! and yk I'm a sucker for nostalgia :') this was really well written and now I'm emo
Reading hindi is not my strongest skill and I really struggle with, even I don't know how i managed to write this in 2 days but I guess the words just flowed naturally, very grateful to hear someone coming back to read your work-always a great feeling. And yes I am too a great sucker of nostalgia, thank you so much Aru for reading♥️♥️
This was really such a beautiful, immersive read. Dil ko choo gya bilkul. Pehle toh laga jaise yatra vritant ho, lekin phir dheere dheere post ki nazukta samjh aayi.
Mai bhi apne Nana Nani ko Kaka aur mai kehti thi (meri mammi unko isi nam se bulati thin) dadaji se toh mili hi nhi mai, aur dadi ko bhi 'mai' hi bolti thi.
I wasn't too close to my grandparents but some memories really stay in heart.
I loved the small details especially..aam le jana, hath ka pankha chalana, chocolate ke liye chup chup ke Jana, aur philosophical aspect too towards the end about gratitude and how humans remain ungrateful for a long time...
This was really a very special post.
Loved it so much❤️
Ps- Also before you lose a tooth, do get it checked, they will fill it and your nanaji's memory will stay intact with the tooth. It gets very painful later on, speaking from experience.
Bhot acha laga sunke ki kisi aur ne bhi nana nani ko amma babu jese naam se bulane ki galti kari hai :))
Mujhe lagta hai bhale aap unse close na ho lekin yaadein shyd kisi vyakti se aap kitna karib hai woh nahi dekhti-wo to bas apke dimag me bas jati hai.
I appreciate you noticing the small details because i believe in trying to sound profound we often neglect small acts of gratitude as they don't sound sexy enough but when I sit and think all the small and personal details about other author's writing sticks well to me so I decided to try it myself. Very happy it landed well!
Thank you for reading Aparna, really appreciate your effort and will definitely get my tooth checked🤣.
what a heartfelt post, i cried through out, for you and i both. i know how much you love babu and it was very evident in this writing. made me remember my nana. beautiful writing chodya, very proud of you for this. 🫂❤️
told you, you'll be back w a banger!
Areee nana ki yaad ayi tumko isse bada kya achievement ho sktaa haii, thank you so much parnika for making it throughout the writing, was very skeptical but I though posting something is better than nothing, I am very happy this could land good. Thank you so much for reading♥️♥️♥️!!
bhai please keep posting in hindi — this was so beautiful. i love reading hindi, added a layer of adoration because i know you a bit. i was absolutely blown away by the way you described the scenes you set up. it’s like every landscape carried with it its own sense of nostalgia and longing. thank you for posting, i feel so lucky to read this. beautiful beautiful! also, i love my grandparents too so it made me a little too emotional since i could see the way age makes us a little distant but the love is so omnipresent! goddamn imma bawl!
Bhai so true even love reading hindi, it feels so fresh and rejuvenating, I will try to write more in hindi and also avoid the grammatical mistakes which I know are present somewhere, thank you for the suggestion I will surely try writing in hindi more :)
Are It's my pleasure that curious and literature appreciating people like you read my work, I am the lucky one bhai🥹
The love for grandparents being omnipresent is so on point, I feel it definitely survives even after they leave us. Very happy that my writing could remind you of your grandparents, so so happy you read this🥹♥️♥️!!!
Ye padhke school key hindi textbook yaad aagayi...could make a really good chapter ❤️🤘🏻
Aapne to dil khush krdiya yrr bhot bhot dhanywad apke is comment ke lie bhot acha laga sunke🥹🥹🫶🏻
बहुत ही अच्छा लिखा है, दोस्त। सोमवार की शाम काम के बीच चाय के साथ तुम्हारी इस रचना ने आज चाय और बिस्किट की दोस्ती में दरार ला दी।
इस रचना ने मुझे अंत तक इस प्रकार बांधे रखा कि मैंने हर एक पात्र और दृश्य जैसे वह लोहे का दरवाजा, आम की पेटी पकड़े बच्चों, पुल, उन भेड़-बकरियों और सबकी छवि अपने मन में बना ली।
तुम्हारे नानाजी और उनके प्रति तुम्हारा लगाव जिस प्रकार तुमने व्यक्त किया है, वह हृदय को स्पर्श कर गया।
पढ़ते-पढ़ते एक अनुभूति तो थी कि अंत में कोई दुखद समाचार होगा, किन्तु फिर भी पढ़ने के बाद मन भारी सा हो गया।
और मैं तो केवल पढ़ रहा हूँ… तुम पर क्या बीती होगी, इसका पूर्णतः अनुमान भी नहीं लगा सकता।
शायद कुछ संबंध कभी पूरी तरह समाप्त नहीं होते, वे केवल स्मृतियों के रूप में हमारे भीतर रह जाते हैं।
जैसा कि महादेवी वर्मा ने लिखा है
“स्मृतियाँ कभी नष्ट नहीं होतीं, वे केवल रूप बदल लेती हैं।"
अंत में फिर से कहना चाहूंगा
यह रचना सचमुच बहुत सुंदर है।
उम्मीद करता हूँ कि तुम ऐसे ही लिखते रहो और सदा खुश रहो।
और जैसा कि तुम में पुस्तक लिखने के बारे में कहा है। तो यदि कभी तुम पुस्तक लिखो, तो मैं उसे अवश्य खरीदकर पढ़ूंगा।
आपके इतने विस्तार से लिखे हुए कमेन्ट के लीए पहले तो एक बहुत बड़ा आभार अनिमेष भाई।
मुझे बहुत अच्छा लगा सुन के की आपकी शाम की चाय के बीच यह लेख आपको मिला और आपने इसको अपने पूरे ध्यान से पढ़ा।
महादेवी वर्मा की ये पंक्ति मैने पहली बार पढ़ी है और इसे पढ़ के मुझे काफी अच्छा महसूस हुआ, मेरे नानाजी के प्रति मेरे प्रेम को आपने इतनी बारीकी से पहचाना उसके लिए में आपका बहुत आभारी रहूंगा।
किताब में तो अभी वक्त है लेकिन आपके शब्दों ने मुझमें लिखने की ऊर्जा का संचार कर दिया है, अवश्य जब में भविष्य में किताब लिखूंगा तो आप जरूर पढ़िएगा।
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आपका पढ़ने के लिए🥹🙏🏻
Looks like I mixed things up a bit. I was going to quote महादेवी वर्मा, but ended up using this line instead and forgot to remove that part. Monday mistakes 😭
Are it's okay the comment still stands, thankyou😭
I LOVED SO DAMN MUCH I'm this close to sobbing wow, the way you write in hindi is so grounded and in a way delighting, the memories part was so aching, i don't know what to say except that I feel like sobbing uncontrollably, so good yaar, would love more hindi posts from you 🫶🏻🫶🏻
also good luck with that cavity, RCT is in the top 10 worst things that can happen to a person 💔
I am glad the memories could invoke a sense of the weight they carry within, thanks for the appreciation of hindi, believe me it was very hard for me to write not because of the memories but because of the hindi grammar and words😭
I know I will suffer with rct im just ready for it #embracesuffering
Thank you so much for reading Sakshi♥️♥️🫶🏻
also hindi is so beautiful man
so clearly I need to start reading more hindi because this took more energy than i thought but I had such an experience with this piece??? I'm definitely going to keep coming back to this!! I loved reading about your memories through this piece and it felt so personal and so heartfelt!! and yk I'm a sucker for nostalgia :') this was really well written and now I'm emo
Reading hindi is not my strongest skill and I really struggle with, even I don't know how i managed to write this in 2 days but I guess the words just flowed naturally, very grateful to hear someone coming back to read your work-always a great feeling. And yes I am too a great sucker of nostalgia, thank you so much Aru for reading♥️♥️
This was really such a beautiful, immersive read. Dil ko choo gya bilkul. Pehle toh laga jaise yatra vritant ho, lekin phir dheere dheere post ki nazukta samjh aayi.
Mai bhi apne Nana Nani ko Kaka aur mai kehti thi (meri mammi unko isi nam se bulati thin) dadaji se toh mili hi nhi mai, aur dadi ko bhi 'mai' hi bolti thi.
I wasn't too close to my grandparents but some memories really stay in heart.
I loved the small details especially..aam le jana, hath ka pankha chalana, chocolate ke liye chup chup ke Jana, aur philosophical aspect too towards the end about gratitude and how humans remain ungrateful for a long time...
This was really a very special post.
Loved it so much❤️
Ps- Also before you lose a tooth, do get it checked, they will fill it and your nanaji's memory will stay intact with the tooth. It gets very painful later on, speaking from experience.
Bhot acha laga sunke ki kisi aur ne bhi nana nani ko amma babu jese naam se bulane ki galti kari hai :))
Mujhe lagta hai bhale aap unse close na ho lekin yaadein shyd kisi vyakti se aap kitna karib hai woh nahi dekhti-wo to bas apke dimag me bas jati hai.
I appreciate you noticing the small details because i believe in trying to sound profound we often neglect small acts of gratitude as they don't sound sexy enough but when I sit and think all the small and personal details about other author's writing sticks well to me so I decided to try it myself. Very happy it landed well!
Thank you for reading Aparna, really appreciate your effort and will definitely get my tooth checked🤣.
Thank you so much for reading♥️♥️!!